I’m amazed at how much is trapped inside of me.
.....
Distant horizon, a slow twirl of the mind and I see it forming.
Something deep inside of me knows that this picture, I must see painted.
There’s red and blush pink, there’s a hint of yellow.
Strands of colour and a dark form.
Years might pass and i could sit here watching the scene unfold.
It begins to fill with light.
It fascinates, the light beckons.
Dire anticipation.
Sweet longing.
Secret fear.
Woof! Taffy sees a doggy friend.
My reverie is broken.
as the trees fold into focus i see fleeting glimpses of the unfinished frame...
lilting tunes fading
And then, like the crescendo that was never anticipated...
Realization dawns.
And I, Smile.
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Interesting, nice and pristine, beautiful use of words.
Hi!
Thanks for checking out my blog :) I will begin the checking out process on yours now! :) :)
Interesting. Nice read.
Tc,
Nikki
http://disillussionednik.blogspot.com
Really nice flow of words.
Kisses.
whoaaa...
intense....
:)
with d right words for dramatic feel and sudden drop in dramatism with "taffy".
nice...
humm, nice. it was nore like a short story though.
its not done, no one can have an entirely happy blog, unless ofcourse one is very very high. i hate the fact that i havent had a funny post in friggin ages, please oh please be morose, not emo because then its funny, just morose
to taffy!
good one mate!
The first line.."I’m amazed at how much is trapped inside of me."
and
The last line.."And then, like the crescendo that was never anticipated... Realization dawns."
Very professional. I like !!
Wow..that was intense..loved it :)
@All: eeeeEKS! i totally forgot to drop in on my own blog!
as you might know i have moved 'em all to
http://subtle-signs.blogspot.com
See you there :)
@rashmi, nikki: thank you girls :)
@Iggy: are you like checking me out? *sorry couldn't resist :P
@lips: thank you i dropped by your blog long back and forgot to do it again! will do soon, see you on my other blog.
@iceprincess: thank you :)
this 'incident' it truly happened and thats the best part! Taffy keeps me grounded, he says hi btw ;)
@Zillion: thank you, like i said above, i was just trying to lend words to something that truly happened. i don't think much about the form, its irrelevant, dont you think :)
@Freudian slip: try www.subtle-signs.blogspot.com
im sure itll be more to yopur liking.
and yes, i agree, i tried but couldn't keep it up. BUT i shall keep trying.
PS: when have i denied the fact that i am/was/going to be in a position to have an 'entirely happy blog' ;)
@DP: thank you, and taffy is still saying hi back to you. yes he's weird that way. ;)
@anand: thank you. professional.. hmmm interesting ;)will drop by your blog/s soon!
i blog at www.subtle-signs.blogspot.com now. see you there :)
@Shanu: thank you! :)
Dire anticipation.
Sweet longing.
Secret fear.
That is agony and ecstasy, hell and sunshine, force, need and gloriously unconnected.
@mikimbizi
thank you.
i love the words you use.
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